Thursday, February 17, 2011

is there a reason to live in the paradise lost??

from here i look above..to that world you say about
i wanted to go high up and kiss the twinking cosmos
the glimpse that i got of peach of beauty....
which cannot be contained in your cells of imagination....or dreams beyond reality checks
here bawl is not the signal of life from the womb of creation
wisdom by birth leaves the lives without any opportunity to get stained
in this magnum opus of perfection conflict for power is an ellusion,
forms of betrayel,revenge,cause an effect wont be a reason to bleed
the hierarchy starting from the enslaved almighty to its vandalizing patrons to free blemishes of anarchists cant be seen anywhere....
my call of instincts wont haunt here when there is no trace of hunger or desire of flesh...
militon's seven sins is the armeggedon which never happens in his paradise.....
i am dropping down....with no grip to hold....
is there a reason to live in thy world???
where spirits are ultimate by birth.....
where there is no thoughts to disturb...no ideologies to fray...
where dogmas wont intrude the existence.....
is there a reason when the the strugle i am captivated with has no meaning ??
is there a reason where there is no feces to get rid of or any bread to stuff in??

2 comments:

  1. i like it veeerry veerrry much:)..esp the magnum opus line and "where dogmas don't intrude existence"..so coool ya:D..u wrote it?:)..and i didnt understand the last two lines..you mean is there a reason "why"??. And, it depends on whether you believe in the idea of paradise given by everyone. Personally i just think everyone turns back into a ball of energy. So there's no point yearning to be in heaven or face the conflict, you're dead in the end anyhw. And also,i agree the notion of heaven and everything being perfect is not as it seems i ,mean, people can survive on being passionate about conflict too, till death, thereby making the idea of going to a perfect place with nil emotions seem dull. Actually, you're right,why would anyone wanna "live" anywhere without all the conflict:|. That will be a sad, sad life(so ironical its still called life in paradise). Buuut, I'd love not to see a sad face, or lose someone, anyone anywhere, o see the bloodshed anyday. And so, for those who believe it, who are not very fire- brand, who have to face actual real conflict in life- there is reason, just to escape from the pain. Those kinda ppl would ask, why suffer the pain?..sooo depends on the character of ppl gautam. it's an idea of ultimate peace. That's what everyone wants to achieve even through conflict right. I don't even think any of this made sense:|, Anyhw, it's nice, but can have a million arguments against it and for it.

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  2. daz how an idea should be ryt??gnrate arguments

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